My very first article on Dan Hardy
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11-11-2010, 07:21 AM
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Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: Portland, OR
by the way, re-reading again even with my own edits, i missed several other things. let me know if you found this helpful and ill give you a few other suggestions. i dont have time to write myself these days, but i still like to edit
His helmet was stifling, it narrowed his vision. And he must see far. His shield was heavy. It threw him off balance. And his target is far away.
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