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Old 11-26-2010, 07:35 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by Mckeever View Post
Wow, thanks a lot for the input man, seems like my article was riddled with grammatical errors. I found that really helpful and would appreciate even more feedback if you get the time
it was a good read. i didnt spot many obvious grammar issues apart from a few typos. obviously i use mindspeak and lower case so im not giving the best account of myself here . lol.

arlovskis had his clock cleaned before fedor and id like to learn more about hardys past. thats the two things that stood out critique wise.

other than that excellent article.
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