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post #10 of (permalink) Old 11-26-2010, 07:58 PM Thread Starter
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Originally Posted by VincePierce View Post
it was a good read. i didnt spot many obvious grammar issues apart from a few typos. obviously i use mindspeak and lower case so im not giving the best account of myself here . lol.

arlovskis had his clock cleaned before fedor and id like to learn more about hardys past. thats the two things that stood out critique wise.

other than that excellent article.
Thanks, and to Bubba.

I know Arlovski had been KO'd before, but it was after the Fedor one (which was just highly embarrassing) that really seemed to destroy him. Couldn't really think of a better example at the time.
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