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Originally Posted by VincePierce
it was a good read. i didnt spot many obvious grammar issues apart from a few typos. obviously i use mindspeak and lower case so im not giving the best account of myself here . lol.
arlovskis had his clock cleaned before fedor and id like to learn more about hardys past. thats the two things that stood out critique wise.
other than that excellent article.
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Thanks, and to Bubba.
I know Arlovski had been KO'd before, but it was after the Fedor one (which was just highly embarrassing) that really seemed to destroy him. Couldn't really think of a better example at the time.