The jab seems to be more of a push than a snap, work on bursting with the jab rather than just pushing it into the bag.
I wasn't able to see much in the area of footwork or head movement, but it seemed more like just some direct attack stuff rather than ellusive in and out style striking.
It looked like sometimes when you threw the jab your other hand dropped a bit. It was marginal, but it dropped a few times.
Work on that superman punch. A lot.
The rear leg body kicks sounded nice and looked solid. Technique looked pretty damn good.
Clinch looked like it needed some more work, as did the front kicks.
Also seemed like you might have been breathing a little heavily after such a short period, don't know if you'd been doing more beforehand, but it appeared to need some work.
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