Hahah...Side you really made him feel welcome.
Video is not bad for a first timer, but all of us here are pretty accustomed to LayzieTheSavage, Nick The Face or One Cal quality HL vids.
If you're creating a video within five hours it's probably going to be average. Each minute should probably take you 10 hours to get the right footage and sync it in with the right music track, sound effect, or voice overlay. Then you gotta edit it repeatedly to perfection. Stay away from the cheesy hip hop, Slayer Death/Megadeath/Rob Zombie tracks, or the overly dramatic orchaestral music. It's been done one too many times. Otherwise keep it up.
This is one of my all time favorites. It's long, but damn it's very well put together; quote, intro, sick music that that matches the intensity of the fight footage. It really flows well.