I personally can't see anything wrong with the banner. Only thing though, is to probably get rid of that "shatter" cutout behind the text as they are flashin (up top)
But I think you out did yourself here. Especially with the model you chose, I'm sure ALOT of people will recognize her (I know I did) and click your banner.
PS: Maybe you should have me design your banners for you, maybe work with your model a bit. I got good ideas