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Old 06-11-2009, 04:42 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 06-11-2009, 04:46 PM   #2 (permalink)
 
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I like the flowers in color and the girl in b/w.
The lines on the right side (the 4 distorted ones) ruin that side imo.
Nice effects.

Just try getting rid of those stripes. It looks like you were just tossing in random effects to fill the space.
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Old 06-11-2009, 04:48 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I like the flowers in color and the girl in b/w.
The lines on the right side (the 4 distorted ones) ruin that side imo.
Nice effects.

Just try getting rid of those stripes. It looks like you were just tossing in random effects to fill the space.
Yeah, that's pretty much what I did.

Here's without it:

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Old 06-11-2009, 04:54 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I'd remove the flowers that are in front of her face....but then again I is a dancer, not an artist.
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Old 06-11-2009, 07:32 PM   #6 (permalink)
 
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Yeah, that's pretty much what I did.

Here's without it:

I think this version looks much better.
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Old 06-13-2009, 03:41 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Yeah, that's pretty much what I did.

Here's without it:

Very nice, man.

This version is better, for sure.

Good job.
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Old 06-13-2009, 09:17 PM   #8 (permalink)
 
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Yeah, that's pretty much what I did.

Here's without it:

Great sig dude! Nice text as well, I rarely like text on sigs, even my own. Although I'd move it closer to the main focal point as it draws attention away.

Good job!
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Old 06-13-2009, 09:41 PM   #9 (permalink)
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I think this version looks much better.
Yeah I agree, excellent suggestion.

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Very nice, man.

This version is better, for sure.

Good job.
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Great sig dude! Nice text as well, I rarely like text on sigs, even my own. Although I'd move it closer to the main focal point as it draws attention away.

Good job!
Thanks. It's great to get feedback from a great gfx guy as yourself.
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