Thanks for the critics.
I'll have another go at this one, sometimes in the near future. It's in my "to do" list
it's always easier to look at someone else's work and critique..
when it comes to designing your own.. it's a bit trickier :P
i have a hard time as well.. and learning just like you ..
But what i do is experiment with tutorials .. there's tons of really good ones that can be found on Google..
I must have done atleast 50 tutorials, from beginning to end.. there are many tricks/tips that i have learned from them..
i.e. focus & depth is very important in a good sig .. something that is neglected often..
Here's one of my favorites.. it contains 15 really good Tutorials
i have done them all from beginning to end.. one of my favorites is 'Gryphon' .. i like his style and simplicity..