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post #1 of 54 (permalink) Old 09-07-2007, 08:47 PM Thread Starter
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[Poetry] Submit yours here

I tend to write poetry/lyrics and I have come to learn some of you do to. Well post your work here. As I writer I also enjoy reading others work. Here is a couple of mine. My inspiration is my life and people. I am a huge people watcher and sometimes it gets me thinking hard. People are interesting and a huge inspiration in many ways. Even if you never have said a word to them.

A kid stranded with no love
Guns, murder and drugs
Born to kill, learned to spill
Your blood
Not a moment will he cry
Not a time will he die
A wall you built in this life
A life you forgot
Now its another body
Another bloody knife
But its not even a surprise
You have any direction for a mother f*****
Sanity does not rest here
Its ruthless, darkness and an evil stare
So you want to be my N.I.G.G.A.?
I dont see an easy way
Only after a lifetime of pain
Will I say your heart can stay
Its not normal for me to live and be
Free and see whats truley residing within me
But its the words I hear that show the love inside
The face of a beauty and my smile with hope and pride
But for what has died
I have already cried
Said goodbye and gone my way
But its another day to show im fine
Not anymore will I be denying
Love and serenity and the power you behold
Constant smurks cause you give me chills
A real deal to feel
A hand to hold
Direction to seek and my life at a peek
Without falling just staying still
Twenty four seven is a thrill



My brain, INSANE pleads for the sanity
The nerves it hurts but this is just a part of me
The words they eat on my eyes they feed
Instead of conquering this I just lay and bleed
Torn from reality and born to brutality
Craving a piece of you, Down for a bite too
Far beyond what your head could imagine
Thats were I sit, A place I lie
My home town to scream and create sin
Its not the gun that makes me powerful
Its the lack of remorse, feeling and thick skull
Not to close, stand fifty feet away
Dangerous is how its played
Your life will soon fade
Not to ruin your hopes or even dreams
But its not what youve been, its what your seeing
As the dark winds enclose upon your weary soul
Your arms become weak as you fall to the floor
Maybe its now you see how your a piece of shit
You know now but everyone else is over it
Too late to turn back, nothing else to do
But bleed in a pile, mourne the s*** you do
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thats a deep and twisted poem lol, but good...just give me a sec and i will think one up
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Thank you, Thats the way I work. I have some light light stuff but thats another post.
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good work though
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lets see do better....the content could have been a little better but it's not garbage
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Ill throw one at you that might be better for you. Just gotta pull one up out of the hundreds.
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how are the useless?
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Every beat
Is part of a song
Called river of passion
A thousand miles long
Bursting with love
Exploding with desire
Deep down inside
Is an endless fire
Slowly disrobe
From below to above
Get ready to swim
In my lake of love
Hold me close
Feel my heart
Thats the garuntee
We will never be apart
Take this heart
As a lifetime seal
This feeling we share
I know its real

Is that lighter for you??
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Good music helps me write. Manson, Metallica, 2-pac, Atreyu, slipknot.
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